love this! there were quite a bit of spelling mistakes, A few extra word\letters in a Few sentences and Other stuff but that doesnt really bother me, just made a few sentences harder to understand (Atleast for me) But still that doesnt really matter imo ^^
Absolutely incredible, I binged it with every spare minute I got. I noticed some grammatical and spelling errors but thats me being a bit of a snob. Keep it up, I love it.
Also still need to know more about this wretched town. I do love this kind of stories.
Well now we know why Lorcan is so hard on MC. Btw his normal romance is wonderful thing. Feels very organic to me.
I wonder what's Imre's angle on rival romance. Which I love far more than normal one. He is still most deranged of the three, I'm truly fascinated.
But Nia is still the best, as dearest and nearest.
Sally's attempts to make MC find new friends made me feel so fecken bad for them both. Also he is not so patient with MC anymore, I'm awaiting huuuuge scandals.
As for mother dearest... I was delighted to see depressing options, this IF really hits me with something. But moreover I was glad that MC could feel bad for her.
I'm kinda trying to think of the ways to not despise MC family, Orla and parents particularly. But it's hard not to. Then again there are so many really fecked up things about MC that. Well. Escalated this family's unhappiness and cruelty. I wonder how much of this on voice in MC'S head. I wonder if MC is some kind of vessel. I wonder what Nia and Sally see in them.
Thank you again for sharing your stories with us. I still remember my skepticism when I first stumbled upon this. And well look at me now!
no i mean im always stuck on that one page where imre and locran and mc are on the cafe investigating sharing theories and then the next page i have to type and answer one thing the victim have in common
On turn 504, after you walk out on sally trying to introduce you to Dina and Travis, the options "Plead with him" and "Escalate things" both just lead to a blank box. Is this a bug or is that the end of the content so far?
I have never had an IF make me feel so strongly. The bullying and tense scenes, as well as Mc's baggage, are so well written that they're terrifying. The mc had so much character and I love it.
Really like how this IF's story goes, but I'm stumped at the meeting with Lorcan and Imre after the TV finding. Is the text box supposed to be a placeholder or it actually should mean something... My 3am brain really couldn't brain it out
Edit: ok nvm I figured it out after a whole day of work lmao
I’m sorry I didn’t answer 😭 for some reason itch.io doesn’t notify me when I get comments anymore but yeah if you ever are stumped ask me on tumblr I’m more active on there ☺️
im OBSESSED with this game, i love how the MC is shown and I adore all the characters :3 (Except Stephanie's boyfriend, hes a weirdo)
I also love the little details, how the other people respond to the MC depending on gender, temperament, and such!!! it makes me really happy to see all those little details put into an already amazing game.
I keep checking it everyday in hopes an update comes cause im impatient, but I really do love this IF and will be drawing my MC as soon as possible
I started to read but my heart wasn't in it, I didn't want to play as a high-schooler. Man was I wrong.
MC is... thanks god and sorry, but I am glad mc is not relatable to me. Still that doesn't mean I wasn't enjoying every crumbs of their past, feeling and reactions. Also the wit. Overall, I want to say that I stayed for this broken child. I came to read about mysterious things but stayed for mc.
Nia is the most sane person here, and I love her. Fall out childhood friends are the best pain, and you delivered. I wonder how did they become friends, I'm worried about her father and his presence in her life. I wonder about the fact that she cares still.
I kept Imre close, and oh my that boy is no less insane than mc. Is that allowed to say? Golden boy, pillar of community and absolutely manipulative egotistical lad.
Lorcan scared the hell out of me in the very beginning, but not now. I will try his route next.
Sally is the most heavy topic for me. And this fact, well, it makes me think about my family situation. I'm thankful for that too.
Joke on me, I'm so emotionally invested into this story. All thanks to your skills as a writer. It's haunted, it's morbid, it's fun. It's insightful in a way that I did not expect. So. Good luck to you! Hope to read more.
"In my restless dreams I see that town..." Anyway, just wanted to say that this is really, really good, the MC is so incredibly well written, it's rare we get such a treat in a CYOA where the protagonist is an actual part of the narrative instead of just a vehicle through which we experience it. I'm looking forward to more chapters, that cliffhanger was something else!
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Hey, what was this recent update for? Is it adding onto the forest scene
love this! there were quite a bit of spelling mistakes, A few extra word\letters in a Few sentences and Other stuff but that doesnt really bother me, just made a few sentences harder to understand (Atleast for me) But still that doesnt really matter imo ^^
This is so Welcome to Night Vale and I love it. The 'ads' every chapter break are so fun to read.
Absolutely incredible, I binged it with every spare minute I got. I noticed some grammatical and spelling errors but thats me being a bit of a snob. Keep it up, I love it.
So glad to see an update! Thank you so much :)
I'm in love with side quests. You did so good!!!
Also still need to know more about this wretched town. I do love this kind of stories.
Well now we know why Lorcan is so hard on MC. Btw his normal romance is wonderful thing. Feels very organic to me.
I wonder what's Imre's angle on rival romance. Which I love far more than normal one. He is still most deranged of the three, I'm truly fascinated.
But Nia is still the best, as dearest and nearest.
Sally's attempts to make MC find new friends made me feel so fecken bad for them both. Also he is not so patient with MC anymore, I'm awaiting huuuuge scandals.
As for mother dearest... I was delighted to see depressing options, this IF really hits me with something. But moreover I was glad that MC could feel bad for her.
I'm kinda trying to think of the ways to not despise MC family, Orla and parents particularly. But it's hard not to. Then again there are so many really fecked up things about MC that. Well. Escalated this family's unhappiness and cruelty. I wonder how much of this on voice in MC'S head. I wonder if MC is some kind of vessel. I wonder what Nia and Sally see in them.
Thank you again for sharing your stories with us. I still remember my skepticism when I first stumbled upon this. And well look at me now!
when is the next update?
I crave more Lorcan
GAHHH I need more Imre I’m convulsing he’s so 🤤
what are we supposed to answer to continue
For what?
to continue to the next chapter like is it for patreon only
The next chapter isn't written yet it's just to 6
no i mean im always stuck on that one page where imre and locran and mc are on the cafe investigating sharing theories and then the next page i have to type and answer one thing the victim have in common
The answer is party
for the interlude. when i try and answer the question it doesnt go through
i always got locked out to an option to sit beside nia in a car? how do i unlock that option?
You don't if you chose to talk to her at the theatre it locks you out. You're not missing anything it's basically the same convo
On turn 504, after you walk out on sally trying to introduce you to Dina and Travis, the options "Plead with him" and "Escalate things" both just lead to a blank box. Is this a bug or is that the end of the content so far?
It was a bug it should be working now :)
hi,do we have to be part of patreon to be able to continue the story?
so the next chapter will go public after I finish some things but for now it is on Patreon
I love this game so much. The MC is their own person and not a blank slate. And the worldbuilding is outstanding. Really great job.
update.T^T
i don’t know when I’ll update. Please don’t pressure me.
I have never had an IF make me feel so strongly. The bullying and tense scenes, as well as Mc's baggage, are so well written that they're terrifying. The mc had so much character and I love it.
Really like how this IF's story goes, but I'm stumped at the meeting with Lorcan and Imre after the TV finding. Is the text box supposed to be a placeholder or it actually should mean something... My 3am brain really couldn't brain it out
Edit: ok nvm I figured it out after a whole day of work lmao
I’m sorry I didn’t answer 😭 for some reason itch.io doesn’t notify me when I get comments anymore but yeah if you ever are stumped ask me on tumblr I’m more active on there ☺️
im OBSESSED with this game, i love how the MC is shown and I adore all the characters :3 (Except Stephanie's boyfriend, hes a weirdo)
I also love the little details, how the other people respond to the MC depending on gender, temperament, and such!!! it makes me really happy to see all those little details put into an already amazing game.
I keep checking it everyday in hopes an update comes cause im impatient, but I really do love this IF and will be drawing my MC as soon as possible
Im gonna start with this - i am impressed.
I started to read but my heart wasn't in it, I didn't want to play as a high-schooler. Man was I wrong.
MC is... thanks god and sorry, but I am glad mc is not relatable to me. Still that doesn't mean I wasn't enjoying every crumbs of their past, feeling and reactions. Also the wit. Overall, I want to say that I stayed for this broken child. I came to read about mysterious things but stayed for mc.
Nia is the most sane person here, and I love her. Fall out childhood friends are the best pain, and you delivered. I wonder how did they become friends, I'm worried about her father and his presence in her life. I wonder about the fact that she cares still.
I kept Imre close, and oh my that boy is no less insane than mc. Is that allowed to say? Golden boy, pillar of community and absolutely manipulative egotistical lad.
Lorcan scared the hell out of me in the very beginning, but not now. I will try his route next.
Sally is the most heavy topic for me. And this fact, well, it makes me think about my family situation. I'm thankful for that too.
Joke on me, I'm so emotionally invested into this story. All thanks to your skills as a writer. It's haunted, it's morbid, it's fun. It's insightful in a way that I did not expect. So. Good luck to you! Hope to read more.
stillwaitingforanupdate. Can't wait to kiss lorcan or we finally do something with the sexual tension
Choose the mean flirt options then walk home with him😏
I did.hehehehe
"In my restless dreams I see that town..."
Anyway, just wanted to say that this is really, really good, the MC is so incredibly well written, it's rare we get such a treat in a CYOA where the protagonist is an actual part of the narrative instead of just a vehicle through which we experience it. I'm looking forward to more chapters, that cliffhanger was something else!
Silent Hill ;)