I get it. Locran is supposed to be enemies to lovers, but I try to tolerate him, but for God's sake, it's hard. He is so exhausting, and the way he constantly mentions our dear sister, oh my, I want to slap him so bad. Never in a million years will my MC take him as LI; if the option to romance him includes the option to have revenge or fck him over, my MC will gladly take that choice. Sorry for the rant overall, I like your story, but we need patience not to snap at every character in this story. Our MC is so pitiful. The angst is a bit much, so I need to take a break to continue reading sometime.
yeah I always say that the characters are morally questionable and downright unlikable at times even the main character hence the title of the game but I do find that he’s fairly popular haha I guess because he’s rather pathetic and people are into that
what do you mean the mc don't know who they I know when someone confused if they are male or female or other they say that but my mc born male and staying that way so i just click I know who i am? or is there different meaning to it DX sorry i just don't know
Excited to see where this goes! I recall finding this IF a long time ago, when it had around 2 or 3 chapters? I found the premise very interesting but now coming back and playing the new chapters, I am totally invested! The MC is great, my favourite type of interactive fiction protagonists are those who have gone through IT and aren't having the best time lmao. Also love literally all 4 of the ROs?? While I am most interested in Lorcan, I am SO curious about Nia and I also find Imre's interactions with MC and Lorcan to be hilarious. I was literally holding back the loudest laugh during chapter 4's trio scene. Also love the MC's siblings, the chaotic love between the three siblings was very sweet! Love that Percy has his own way of looking out for MC.
hi, I have a question. I'm very confused to how long the public (not the one with the patreon) demo is? I'm confused what do you mean chapters? Because for me the game says episode. I am very confused. Otherwise, I do completely agree with you I love all the character dynamics and Percy x MC duo is my personal favourite.
Yes what the author said! I'm just used to calling them chapters but IF authors may have different terms for it in their games, they might call them episodes, chapters, arcs, but yeah they're practically interchangeable.
I wanted to make my mc since i suck at drawing I had use Ai art XD surprisingly turned out well :D now I want to do the family and RO should be fun >w<
Hello! Loving the story so far but I seem to have encountered an error when I reached this part of the story and I can't continue even when I chose other choices T-T
Also, I'm not sure if this was mistake or not but I also noticed this when I was given the option to go to [redacted] alone but it's not actually in one of the choices. Here's the screenshot.
Again, I'm really loving the story so far and can't wait to read more, but I can't continue forward at the moment T-T
I love this so much but to be honest, i find 2/3 of Your projects to Be great. I love the atmosphere and the mystery, i love the enemies romance route, and Im especially thankful you update regularly.
Question: does the update stop with a text box after the page where you tell us to save the game?
Maybe add that the word needs to be lowercase? I did the first side quest and I was raging so hard cause I knew the correct answer but had to find this comment to see it had to be lowercase.
Such an interesting experience! Im curious about the story and the mystery showed.
Regarding the interface:
I would say the problem is not the background itselft, it is the lack of contrast between text color and background color. Many websites and web pages end up using low contrast in their apps when creating a darker mode. The solution would make the text color lighter, that way both (people who enjoy dark mode - me, included - and those who don't as much) will be able to read with no issues.
I have a browser extension that does exactly that, and that's how I was able to read without straining my eyes. However, turning it off makes it a little hard to read it.
Anyway, this IF has a lot of potential! I'm interested in what's to come.
I'd recommend allowing customization of background and text color or alternate themes for them as the current combination isn't imo pleasing to the eyes and deters me from reading
Simply allowing to turn the text white would be enough.
i dont know why but this is such a charming story. I found myself strangely captivated by all the characters and the plot itself. eagerly awaiting new updates. Thank you author!
hey, right after the episode 4 sponsor did you chose what gender/sex your mc is? It’s a small page that says [Your mc’s name] Crown is… then you click it to say either cis female, trans female, etc., if you didn’t do that then it won’t show the side quest nor what it says after spring 1979
actually took me awhile to get into it, but it's so good? This really hits the spot with the small town teen drama romance vibe, it's reminding me of the feelings I had when watching True Blood and those early 2000s TVs with a mix of Stranger Things season 1.
One of the better IFs, plot is very fun and dramatic but writing stays mature and serious, stands out from a lot of cheesy and cliche wattpadesque stories here on Itch, would recommend.
i was wondering when the next update would be coming out roughly. Take your time though! i can only imagine how much time and work goes into this with its beautiful writing and how i just got sucked into the story
Yeah I can never actually say when there’s an update since it largely depends on how much time I have to work on it but it might be this month or the next
This is very good, but i had a question, does the IF currently end just after Sally invites us to the movies? cause there's a password and I'm wondering if i missed something.
I friking love it? OMG the way you write is so mesmerizing? like... from the usage of words to the emotion you transmit with the story, the characters and the lore! Its incredible, literally only 3 chapters (and the third one is not even full) and the story already captivated me?
I adore the way you write, idk if my fav part is how you express MC feelings and hardships or how complex the characters seems and feel...
PS: The... horny part about MC first time lets say calming themself, it was PERFECT I laugh so hard with big bro entering in the worst time possible but also I read all the three possibilities and oh boi, if this story is going to have more scenes like this are going to be *chef kiss* thanks for all your hard work, I cant wait to read more of this
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I get it. Locran is supposed to be enemies to lovers, but I try to tolerate him, but for God's sake, it's hard. He is so exhausting, and the way he constantly mentions our dear sister, oh my, I want to slap him so bad. Never in a million years will my MC take him as LI; if the option to romance him includes the option to have revenge or fck him over, my MC will gladly take that choice. Sorry for the rant overall, I like your story, but we need patience not to snap at every character in this story. Our MC is so pitiful. The angst is a bit much, so I need to take a break to continue reading sometime.
yeah I always say that the characters are morally questionable and downright unlikable at times even the main character hence the title of the game but I do find that he’s fairly popular haha I guess because he’s rather pathetic and people are into that
does the chapter end at mother room? because i dont know the answer for the blank box
what do you mean the mc don't know who they I know when someone confused if they are male or female or other they say that but my mc born male and staying that way so i just click I know who i am? or is there different meaning to it DX sorry i just don't know
I notice when flick water or smile at Lorcan you click on them all i get is a white thing long bar above the page is a glitch or did it end ?
Same here. Lorcan is now truly a perfect wet cat. I need my time with him! :D
I fixed it!
Awesome thank you! now i can continue my chaos XD
Excited to see where this goes! I recall finding this IF a long time ago, when it had around 2 or 3 chapters? I found the premise very interesting but now coming back and playing the new chapters, I am totally invested! The MC is great, my favourite type of interactive fiction protagonists are those who have gone through IT and aren't having the best time lmao. Also love literally all 4 of the ROs?? While I am most interested in Lorcan, I am SO curious about Nia and I also find Imre's interactions with MC and Lorcan to be hilarious. I was literally holding back the loudest laugh during chapter 4's trio scene. Also love the MC's siblings, the chaotic love between the three siblings was very sweet! Love that Percy has his own way of looking out for MC.
hi, I have a question. I'm very confused to how long the public (not the one with the patreon) demo is? I'm confused what do you mean chapters? Because for me the game says episode. I am very confused. Otherwise, I do completely agree with you I love all the character dynamics and Percy x MC duo is my personal favourite.
I just happen to call the episodes, chapters sometimes, it’s the same thing. The public demo is just the four episodes so far
Yes what the author said! I'm just used to calling them chapters but IF authors may have different terms for it in their games, they might call them episodes, chapters, arcs, but yeah they're practically interchangeable.
I wanted to make my mc since i suck at drawing I had use Ai art XD surprisingly turned out well :D now I want to do the family and RO should be fun >w<
What was the update for yesterday for, if you don't mind me asking? Is the next chapter out?
I don’t mind, it’s the update for the Patreon
Is the next chapter only available for patreon atm?
yes
Hello! Loving the story so far but I seem to have encountered an error when I reached this part of the story and I can't continue even when I chose other choices T-T
Here's the screenshots of where I'm currently am.
Also, I'm not sure if this was mistake or not but I also noticed this when I was given the option to go to [redacted] alone but it's not actually in one of the choices. Here's the screenshot.
Again, I'm really loving the story so far and can't wait to read more, but I can't continue forward at the moment T-T
What do I type in the text box after the page you put a note to save the game? Is that the end of the update?
I'd like to know aswell.
I love this so much but to be honest, i find 2/3 of Your projects to Be great. I love the atmosphere and the mystery, i love the enemies romance route, and Im especially thankful you update regularly.
Question: does the update stop with a text box after the page where you tell us to save the game?
i'm confused about that too, i looked through the comments and couldn't find any answers 😔😔
I too am confused about this. Is it the end of the current demo?
:D duo monogamist XD I'm loving it XD lol I keep saying Lorcan
going to be Imre and my lover and your going to like! lol I am loving this I wish there poly with those too I would love that XD
Help! I DON'T KNOW THE FREAKING WORD 😭🥺. IM TO DUMB.
that’s ok it’s party all lowercase
Maybe add that the word needs to be lowercase? I did the first side quest and I was raging so hard cause I knew the correct answer but had to find this comment to see it had to be lowercase.
I actually had no idea what you were talking about because I have two first side quests in each episode 😭 but it’s there now
ah had no clue. the only time I could play side quest was when the first one was the special diet one. that is the answer that made me so mad.
absolutely love this! i'm looking forward to what comes next
i like this a lot, the reading is kind of hard but not enough to take away from the story, i wish you the best going forward
?? I can't see? Nothing changes the text color.
Such an interesting experience! Im curious about the story and the mystery showed.
Regarding the interface:
I would say the problem is not the background itselft, it is the lack of contrast between text color and background color. Many websites and web pages end up using low contrast in their apps when creating a darker mode. The solution would make the text color lighter, that way both (people who enjoy dark mode - me, included - and those who don't as much) will be able to read with no issues.
I have a browser extension that does exactly that, and that's how I was able to read without straining my eyes. However, turning it off makes it a little hard to read it.
Anyway, this IF has a lot of potential! I'm interested in what's to come.
I agree with the comment below. Some people can't stand reading on black background. It would be best to add a white / sepia background.
I'd recommend allowing customization of background and text color or alternate themes for them as the current combination isn't imo pleasing to the eyes and deters me from reading
Simply allowing to turn the text white would be enough.
What's the word? I can't figure it out 😭 he says "one word"
Cough.. guessed it I'm dumb
Could you tell me the word? I’m dumb too and can’t figure it out🧍♀️
party
This is sooooo good!! I love how mad everyone is ;;
Is it known which time in June the public version will be out?
HELP I CHOKED I DIDN'T EXPECT AN UPDATE SO SOON LETS GOO
i dont know why but this is such a charming story. I found myself strangely captivated by all the characters and the plot itself. eagerly awaiting new updates. Thank you author!
Is it supposed to spontaneously end on "Spring 1979"? And the second sidequest also seems to have a deadend after the romans 13-15 thing.
hey, right after the episode 4 sponsor did you chose what gender/sex your mc is? It’s a small page that says [Your mc’s name] Crown is… then you click it to say either cis female, trans female, etc., if you didn’t do that then it won’t show the side quest nor what it says after spring 1979
actually took me awhile to get into it, but it's so good? This really hits the spot with the small town teen drama romance vibe, it's reminding me of the feelings I had when watching True Blood and those early 2000s TVs with a mix of Stranger Things season 1.
One of the better IFs, plot is very fun and dramatic but writing stays mature and serious, stands out from a lot of cheesy and cliche wattpadesque stories here on Itch, would recommend.
Hauntingly beautiful
i'm invested, this is beautifully written. keep it up!!<3
incredible work
i was wondering when the next update would be coming out roughly. Take your time though! i can only imagine how much time and work goes into this with its beautiful writing and how i just got sucked into the story
Yeah I can never actually say when there’s an update since it largely depends on how much time I have to work on it but it might be this month or the next
everytime one of the characters said "who's candace?" i had to violently hold myself back from yelling out the joke
why does it say put in password??
because the rest is for the Patreon access. It’ll be made public next week
This is very good, but i had a question, does the IF currently end just after Sally invites us to the movies? cause there's a password and I'm wondering if i missed something.
Yeah technically it does. The password is for the Patreon. It’ll be made public next week :)
ah, excellent
I think i'm gonna go for the most honest character ever She can be Called. that first, but she is a good person.
My MC is a twisted little freak and not gonna lie. I’m kinda here for it. Insane!MC x Imre supremacy ✨✨
there's absolutely no way i will ever be able to find the fourth route in chapter 3 on my own🧍♂️
hahaha dw I’ll reveal it when I release episode 3 entirely
I friking love it? OMG the way you write is so mesmerizing? like... from the usage of words to the emotion you transmit with the story, the characters and the lore! Its incredible, literally only 3 chapters (and the third one is not even full) and the story already captivated me?
I adore the way you write, idk if my fav part is how you express MC feelings and hardships or how complex the characters seems and feel...
PS: The... horny part about MC first time lets say calming themself, it was PERFECT I laugh so hard with big bro entering in the worst time possible but also I read all the three possibilities and oh boi, if this story is going to have more scenes like this are going to be *chef kiss* thanks for all your hard work, I cant wait to read more of this
Me just getting into it, getting excited
*Finds out it ends at chapter 2 part one*
*AGGRESSIVE SCREAMINGGGGGGG*
ITS CHAPTER 3 PART 2 but it’s not the full episode because chapter 3 has 3 parts so you’ll have to wait for one last bit 😭
I threw my phone because of you....
:) I’ll take it as a compliment
super good I feel sorry for the mc D: I hope there be more soon <3