I have never had an IF make me feel so strongly. The bullying and tense scenes, as well as Mc's baggage, are so well written that they're terrifying. The mc had so much character and I love it.
Really like how this IF's story goes, but I'm stumped at the meeting with Lorcan and Imre after the TV finding. Is the text box supposed to be a placeholder or it actually should mean something... My 3am brain really couldn't brain it out
Edit: ok nvm I figured it out after a whole day of work lmao
I’m sorry I didn’t answer 😭 for some reason itch.io doesn’t notify me when I get comments anymore but yeah if you ever are stumped ask me on tumblr I’m more active on there ☺️
im OBSESSED with this game, i love how the MC is shown and I adore all the characters :3 (Except Stephanie's boyfriend, hes a weirdo)
I also love the little details, how the other people respond to the MC depending on gender, temperament, and such!!! it makes me really happy to see all those little details put into an already amazing game.
I keep checking it everyday in hopes an update comes cause im impatient, but I really do love this IF and will be drawing my MC as soon as possible
I started to read but my heart wasn't in it, I didn't want to play as a high-schooler. Man was I wrong.
MC is... thanks god and sorry, but I am glad mc is not relatable to me. Still that doesn't mean I wasn't enjoying every crumbs of their past, feeling and reactions. Also the wit. Overall, I want to say that I stayed for this broken child. I came to read about mysterious things but stayed for mc.
Nia is the most sane person here, and I love her. Fall out childhood friends are the best pain, and you delivered. I wonder how did they become friends, I'm worried about her father and his presence in her life. I wonder about the fact that she cares still.
I kept Imre close, and oh my that boy is no less insane than mc. Is that allowed to say? Golden boy, pillar of community and absolutely manipulative egotistical lad.
Lorcan scared the hell out of me in the very beginning, but not now. I will try his route next.
Sally is the most heavy topic for me. And this fact, well, it makes me think about my family situation. I'm thankful for that too.
Joke on me, I'm so emotionally invested into this story. All thanks to your skills as a writer. It's haunted, it's morbid, it's fun. It's insightful in a way that I did not expect. So. Good luck to you! Hope to read more.
"In my restless dreams I see that town..." Anyway, just wanted to say that this is really, really good, the MC is so incredibly well written, it's rare we get such a treat in a CYOA where the protagonist is an actual part of the narrative instead of just a vehicle through which we experience it. I'm looking forward to more chapters, that cliffhanger was something else!
I don't understand does it end 0n turn 195 after it says "One day your son will do something you won't be able to save him from.", because after that it's just a blank box? Otherwise very well done. And if it doesn't end there(as it's in episode 3 and isn't there 5 episode), is there a way to fix it? Thanks!
yes so there was a twine update that messed up existing code (it's very annoying that it does that) but I'll get to this week and make a post here to announce it when it's done!
GODDDD I just finished the most recent chapter and I’ve gone over all the routes like 5 times, Imre takes the cake though, he’s so interesting and I can’t wait too see more of him, he’s so complex (extremely fine too) and I love it. Great writing!! Kudos to you for all of these updates big and small, thank you for your hard work, looking forward to the next one!
I feel like there’s so many moments with the boys, and I get it when ol’ girl is purposely avoiding MC, but their Complicated is *delicious* - and I have been Waiting for this sort of scene between them for so. Damn. Long. And you delivered: The imagery, the tension, (the inevitable, incomprehensible flirting?) Fabulous. I even did another run to see what her rivalmance is like — and I love them both. Seeing Nia give anything - More than apathy is something me and MC *both* crave, yet never expect. Gotta love it when the childhood friend hurts the most…. Thanks for the meal (literal and figurative)~
I don't think I've commented on this IF before so I really want to give it the praise it deserveS
You are an incredible writer! I love how personable the dialogue options are for the MC and how distinct it sets them apart from everyone in the cast
I love the ad segments I got a real good laugh at the lice reveal for this new update and I hope they've been a fun for you to write like they are for me to read them!!
The one last thing I'll say is that it's really understated at times just how amazing you writers are for creating IF mainly for free so I give you a million thankyous for sharing your story with us!
Hey, sorry. I'm just confused, what exactly are you supposed to type in the text box when you're in the mother's room? I've actually been stuck there for a while. (╥ _ ╥)
hiiii!! first of all I need to say I love this game sososo much!!! but I found a little mistake in the second side quest, when you are helping Charley and Marissa.
lil spoilers!
When they asked you about where you would like to live if you have a lot of money, you can choose Spain, if you choose that, you get this:
"...Spain."
Marissa grins, saying, "paella and bulls?"
You nod, "yeah, Argentina sounds like a great place to go."
Argentina is a hispanic country on South America, Spain is the country in Europe!
Oh, and if you choose Italy, they talk about gelato and siesta. I think in Italy also they take some siestas, but I don't know if they called them like that too, usually the "siesta" thing is also a stereotype of Spain hahaha but maybe is something usual in Italy too
Either way, thank you so much for all your hard work! I love this story so much! I cant wait to read more of it < 333
PS: If is true that geographically Gibraltar is in the Iberian Peninsula, and it was Spain territory, officially, now is part of UK, since Ultrech Treaty
yeah I’m Latina I know that difference between Latin America and Spain it’s just a glitch 😭 and they do call it siesta in Italy as well and as for the Gibraltar it’s just there because geographically it’s in Spain
Ohh entonces perfecto, perdona que te responda en español, me es más rápido hacerlo así, espero que no te haya sentado mal, es que no sería la primera vez que veo a alguien poniendo que España está en Latinoamérica xD y era más que nada para corregir ese pequeño error
Lo de Gibraltar no debería haber mucho problema dado que en ese entonces tanto Inglaterra como España estarían en la UE y por ende habría una mayor libertad de paso (de hecho la sigue habiendo incluso cuando UK ya no está en la UE XD) pero no sabía que eras una persona latina así que pensé que quizá habías buscado zonas aleatorias en España (cosa que yo también hago, las cosas como son) para poner un lugar bonito y justo diste con Gibraltar, así que lo pusiste pensando que era parte de España
Sea como fuese, me encanta tu historia y la forma en la que das forma a los personajes, espero seguir leyendote por mucho tiempo 💙💙
what do you mean the mc don't know who they I know when someone confused if they are male or female or other they say that but my mc born male and staying that way so i just click I know who i am? or is there different meaning to it DX sorry i just don't know
I don't get notifications for itch.io so I'm sorry the reply is late. When the main character says they don't know who they are they aren't talking about gender or sex at all. They are talking about their personality, who they are as a person. They don't know yet.
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I love this game so much. The MC is their own person and not a blank slate. And the worldbuilding is outstanding. Really great job.
update.T^T
i don’t know when I’ll update. Please don’t pressure me.
I have never had an IF make me feel so strongly. The bullying and tense scenes, as well as Mc's baggage, are so well written that they're terrifying. The mc had so much character and I love it.
Really like how this IF's story goes, but I'm stumped at the meeting with Lorcan and Imre after the TV finding. Is the text box supposed to be a placeholder or it actually should mean something... My 3am brain really couldn't brain it out
Edit: ok nvm I figured it out after a whole day of work lmao
I’m sorry I didn’t answer 😭 for some reason itch.io doesn’t notify me when I get comments anymore but yeah if you ever are stumped ask me on tumblr I’m more active on there ☺️
im OBSESSED with this game, i love how the MC is shown and I adore all the characters :3 (Except Stephanie's boyfriend, hes a weirdo)
I also love the little details, how the other people respond to the MC depending on gender, temperament, and such!!! it makes me really happy to see all those little details put into an already amazing game.
I keep checking it everyday in hopes an update comes cause im impatient, but I really do love this IF and will be drawing my MC as soon as possible
Im gonna start with this - i am impressed.
I started to read but my heart wasn't in it, I didn't want to play as a high-schooler. Man was I wrong.
MC is... thanks god and sorry, but I am glad mc is not relatable to me. Still that doesn't mean I wasn't enjoying every crumbs of their past, feeling and reactions. Also the wit. Overall, I want to say that I stayed for this broken child. I came to read about mysterious things but stayed for mc.
Nia is the most sane person here, and I love her. Fall out childhood friends are the best pain, and you delivered. I wonder how did they become friends, I'm worried about her father and his presence in her life. I wonder about the fact that she cares still.
I kept Imre close, and oh my that boy is no less insane than mc. Is that allowed to say? Golden boy, pillar of community and absolutely manipulative egotistical lad.
Lorcan scared the hell out of me in the very beginning, but not now. I will try his route next.
Sally is the most heavy topic for me. And this fact, well, it makes me think about my family situation. I'm thankful for that too.
Joke on me, I'm so emotionally invested into this story. All thanks to your skills as a writer. It's haunted, it's morbid, it's fun. It's insightful in a way that I did not expect. So. Good luck to you! Hope to read more.
stillwaitingforanupdate. Can't wait to kiss lorcan or we finally do something with the sexual tension
Choose the mean flirt options then walk home with him😏
I did.hehehehe
"In my restless dreams I see that town..."
Anyway, just wanted to say that this is really, really good, the MC is so incredibly well written, it's rare we get such a treat in a CYOA where the protagonist is an actual part of the narrative instead of just a vehicle through which we experience it. I'm looking forward to more chapters, that cliffhanger was something else!
Silent Hill ;)
I don't understand does it end 0n turn 195 after it says "One day your son will do something you won't be able to save him from.", because after that it's just a blank box? Otherwise very well done. And if it doesn't end there(as it's in episode 3 and isn't there 5 episode), is there a way to fix it? Thanks!
yes so there was a twine update that messed up existing code (it's very annoying that it does that) but I'll get to this week and make a post here to announce it when it's done!
Thanks for letting me know
GODDDD I just finished the most recent chapter and I’ve gone over all the routes like 5 times, Imre takes the cake though, he’s so interesting and I can’t wait too see more of him, he’s so complex (extremely fine too) and I love it. Great writing!! Kudos to you for all of these updates big and small, thank you for your hard work, looking forward to the next one!
what's the code to the next chapter?or i should joined patreon first
Finally. FINALLY. NIA.
I feel like there’s so many moments with the boys, and I get it when ol’ girl is purposely avoiding MC, but their Complicated is *delicious* - and I have been Waiting for this sort of scene between them for so. Damn. Long. And you delivered: The imagery, the tension, (the inevitable, incomprehensible flirting?) Fabulous. I even did another run to see what her rivalmance is like — and I love them both. Seeing Nia give anything - More than apathy is something me and MC *both* crave, yet never expect. Gotta love it when the childhood friend hurts the most…. Thanks for the meal (literal and figurative)~
I don't think I've commented on this IF before so I really want to give it the praise it deserveS
You are an incredible writer! I love how personable the dialogue options are for the MC and how distinct it sets them apart from everyone in the cast
I love the ad segments I got a real good laugh at the lice reveal for this new update and I hope they've been a fun for you to write like they are for me to read them!!
The one last thing I'll say is that it's really understated at times just how amazing you writers are for creating IF mainly for free so I give you a million thankyous for sharing your story with us!
I saw this error when you walking home in rain storm Error: child tag <</if>> was found outside of a call to its parent macro <<if>>
thank you! I do ask that any errors are sent to tumblr since I don’t check these comments much
oh sorry XD I will remember that for next time
When's a updat? T^T I come check every day to see if there's an update.
I don't know, writing plus going to school makes me not know when. Hopefully I'll update it sometime this month
Hey, sorry. I'm just confused, what exactly are you supposed to type in the text box when you're in the mother's room? I've actually been stuck there for a while. (╥ _ ╥)
no worries, that’s actually just Patreon access (I’ve been meaning to add a little note there) that’s the next eosisoe which will become public soon
So....Is that where the chapter ends?? or it'll be continued?
it’s where the episode ends yes, it will be continued when I release it to the public
hello Again i don't know it finished or its gliched but at the part of your aunt's cassette tape
there nothing click continue its blank unless thats end of the demo?
yeah that’s basically it
ok thank you XD
hiiii!! first of all I need to say I love this game sososo much!!! but I found a little mistake in the second side quest, when you are helping Charley and Marissa.
lil spoilers!
When they asked you about where you would like to live if you have a lot of money, you can choose Spain, if you choose that, you get this:
"...Spain." Marissa grins, saying, "paella and bulls?" You nod, "yeah, Argentina sounds like a great place to go."
Argentina is a hispanic country on South America, Spain is the country in Europe!
Oh, and if you choose Italy, they talk about gelato and siesta. I think in Italy also they take some siestas, but I don't know if they called them like that too, usually the "siesta" thing is also a stereotype of Spain hahaha but maybe is something usual in Italy too
Either way, thank you so much for all your hard work! I love this story so much! I cant wait to read more of it < 333
PS: If is true that geographically Gibraltar is in the Iberian Peninsula, and it was Spain territory, officially, now is part of UK, since Ultrech Treaty
yeah I’m Latina I know that difference between Latin America and Spain it’s just a glitch 😭 and they do call it siesta in Italy as well and as for the Gibraltar it’s just there because geographically it’s in Spain
Ohh entonces perfecto, perdona que te responda en español, me es más rápido hacerlo así, espero que no te haya sentado mal, es que no sería la primera vez que veo a alguien poniendo que España está en Latinoamérica xD y era más que nada para corregir ese pequeño error
Lo de Gibraltar no debería haber mucho problema dado que en ese entonces tanto Inglaterra como España estarían en la UE y por ende habría una mayor libertad de paso (de hecho la sigue habiendo incluso cuando UK ya no está en la UE XD) pero no sabía que eras una persona latina así que pensé que quizá habías buscado zonas aleatorias en España (cosa que yo también hago, las cosas como son) para poner un lugar bonito y justo diste con Gibraltar, así que lo pusiste pensando que era parte de España
Sea como fuese, me encanta tu historia y la forma en la que das forma a los personajes, espero seguir leyendote por mucho tiempo 💙💙
what do you mean the mc don't know who they I know when someone confused if they are male or female or other they say that but my mc born male and staying that way so i just click I know who i am? or is there different meaning to it DX sorry i just don't know
I don't get notifications for itch.io so I'm sorry the reply is late. When the main character says they don't know who they are they aren't talking about gender or sex at all. They are talking about their personality, who they are as a person. They don't know yet.